- On the 22nd of April we had our Screening of our film opening, we screened our film opening to a sample of students and peers all of which were within the age of our target audience
- The main outcomes of the screening for us was to recieve feedback from our sample target audience and to also give us a chance to see the film opening from a different perspective and see if there were any bits that we would change to the film
- The feedback that we recieved was on the whole very positive, a majority of the feedback that we recieved was praising how we created tension in our film opening
- However with one of our questionnaire questions related to how clear the narrative was, it was clear that many students didnt understand the film opening fully, for example the montage clip at the end
- However we corrected this by adding the scene in the clip with the victim's eyes opening showing that she isnt dead and that the montage is simply a flashback
Here is our full edited clip (Retribution, Lukwayi, 2013)
Strengths:
- The strong points of our film opening was that we were pleased with the variety of different and creative shots that we shot, especially in the way that this enabled us to build tension
- Furthermore we are pleased with how the editing process in post-production went, we had long enough clips to edit with out a problem which meant that we had the required length of footage after cutting scenes
Weaknesses:
- If we could improve the film opening we would do this by making sure that the narrative is constructed in a clear way so that audiences can understand what is going on clearer
- We could have used the features of the camera we filmed our film opening in to its potential, by choosing to film in 1080p rather than 720p thus giving it a higher definition look and professional look
- We could have done more in post production such as colour correcting scenes such as the first one where it is quite bright, therefore giving is a more natural look